duminică, 4 septembrie 2011

Remorse

Recent am inceput si eu sa simt melancolia si tristetea care ne invaluie ca de obicei cand se termina vara.Cand ne gandim ca parca mai ieri eram in vacanta la mare sau la munte si ne distram de minune.Si uite ca in final trece si timpul si ne trezim ca mai avem atatea de facut...ne intrebam unde a zburat acel minut, acea secunda unica pe care nu o vom mai avea dar care speram ca am petrecut-o cum trebuie.Dar ca sa mai treaca timpul trebuie sa ne obisnuim odata si-odata si sa inceracam sa ne continuam activitatile si sa ne bucuram de viata.Asa ca in cautarea mea de ocupatii am gasit un tip de poezie interesant: in linii mari rebuie sa te gandesti la ce simti si pur si simplu sa scrii.Simplu si usor.Uite ce am reusit:

I'LL BE FINE...
What is wrong with me
Am I hurt?
Auch!...i can feel the pain
Is driving me insane
I feel so lonely
My soul needs you close to me
My heart is crying
It feels so strange
I can feel you here
But still I wish you could be near me
So that I can hold you in my arms
I want to kiss you slowly
So that I can savor the delight
And so I will be sure
You’ll never go away again
And that you’ll stay here
And just show me
That you love me.
Auch!...it happened again
I feel like I’m torn apart
And my heart is burning
And the soul is shouting
It wants out
It wants to be safe
Right next to you.
But don’t worry
I’ll be fine
I shall wait for you
I’ll try
But if I don’t succeed
Then don’t look for me
Don’t search me
Just live your life
‘Cause I’m not going to be here anymore
I’ll be in a distant land
Waiting for you
And when’ll you’ll get there
One more time
I will try
To keep you close to me
In  a long, long kiss…
Incercati si voi.Nu conteaza ce scrieti, simtiti sau daca e bun sau nu.Nu conteaza.Important  e ca intr-un fel va luati ceva de pe suflet si eventual puteti daca vreti sa scrieti in commenturi ce v-o iesit....sa facem un fel de comparatii.Sper ca ati avut o vara faina pt. ca acuma trebuie sa asteptati inca un an pana la urmatoarea.Dar sa privim si partea buna....viata e plina de surprize.


Serus!...

4 comentarii:

  1. k then..let's give it a try :))

    EVILish Ground

    In a lonely day
    While watching my daily commedy show
    The ground started to shatter
    Demons and lifeless beasts
    Death knights and corrupted paladins
    Plagued gargoyles
    Crying theyr way out
    From hell...
    But The Guardian showed up
    With a holy armor
    Smithed by the gods
    On the blessed anvils
    His blade
    His beautiful blazing blade
    Called "Firemourne"
    The evil army crawled around him
    The gods watched the approaching army of the undeath
    And surrounded the holy warrior with a physical shield
    But then, watching his sword, he whispered:
    "Let them come...Firemourne hungers.."

    I know it sucks...But heh..In lumea asta tre sa incerci :P

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  2. awesome man! ce naspa..in arta nu exista rau sau bun, fiecare cu stilul lui.asa ca nu te stresa ca ii super!

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  3. Sunt foarte tari ambele "poezii" daca le pot numi asa. :D Chiar aveti talent. Si, Tudor chiar nu m-am gandit ca ai talent in ale scrierii. Succes in contiunare! Super blog-ul;) Sunt Carmen (colega de banca).

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